Me and my friend

Once upon a time me and my friend were kicking the ball around and it got stuck up in the tree.
When they were going to climb the tree to get the ball we spotted a ginger bread house full of lollies.
We walked in to the house. Inside the house there was an old lady who was a witch and she said they could have some lollies to eat. When we were eating some of the candy the witch pressed a button and cages come down on us were stuck in the cadge. When we  were  in the cage we found a way out.
We killed the witch and  went  back home. Mum and dad were angry at us and  that's why you never  go in to a strange house. Dun dun dun dunn! The end
By Tai.