Once 5 bears went on a picnic.These are their names (dad) Brooklin , (Mum) Brooke , (twins) Angel and Star and (baby) Spark. Spark opened up some yummy cookies.Then Angel poured some milo for Brooklin and Star. Angel ate a few crackers and Brooke ate a fresh banana. Then there was a teddy bear party. There were balloons. Spark wanted to go in a balloon so she sneaked into a balloon. Then Spark's friend blew up the balloon. Then the balloon fell into a freezing river. Then a plane crashed in the river. Spark's family had a funeral, they sang the bear anthem. It goes like this,''oh Spark I wish you didn't die. I wish you were alive. You could be here with us but you're not alive, oh Spark, oh Spark.I wish you were alive,din din din din good bbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee." Brooke and Brooklin had a wedding. Brooklin said "will you marry me please?" Brooke said"yes".
The end.
By Ashley
ash great story from ella I like when you put in the big bye
ReplyDeleteI like the setup of the story
ReplyDeleteJosh
Wow. I loved that story. I think that the idea of having a title of who they are before there name is awesome.
ReplyDeletecool ending ashley
ReplyDeleteGreat imagination ash, love that story xo
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